Est ce que vous pouvez me dire si ce texte est bien cohérent , corriger les fautes et me dire si il y a bien du présent perfect et du bé + ing , si il y a d'autre temps verbaux pouvez vous me le précisez?
Last years , I have gone to London , I saw many monuments as Big Ben , the tower bridge Buckingham palace .... I was left with friends , it was during the Olympics games , we saw a lot of events of JO , it was very great !
In November I have gone to Rome with my family , I ate patte ( je me sais pas comment sa se dit ) and pizza everything in daytime and has the end I could not it any more ! But I was very well , I visited many monuments