Est ce que vous pouvez me dire si ce texte est bien cohérent , corriger les fautes et me dire si il y a bien du présent perfect et du bé + ing , si il y a d'autre temps verbaux pouvez vous me le précisez?
Last years , I have gone to London , I saw many monuments as Big Ben , the tower bridge Buckingham palace .... I was left with friends , it was during the Olympics games , we saw a lot of events of JO , it was very great !
In November I have gone to Rome with my family , I ate patte ( je me sais pas comment sa se dit ) and pizza everything in daytime and has the end I could not it any more ! But I was very well , I visited many monuments

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2013-04-28T14:10:37+02:00
2013-04-28T14:15:39+02:00
Last year, I went to London, I saw a lot of monuments like Big Ben, the Tower Bridge Buckingham Palace and other monuments of the capital. I went overthere with my friends during Olympics. We saw a lot of eventd of this international competition, it was amazing. In november, I went to Rome with my family. We ate pasta and pizza the same day [je ne sais pas ce que tu veux dire] But it was great ans I visited a lot of monuments.
Si tu dois mettre des verbes en Be+ing tu dois changer ton texte car il y en a aucun, sinon pour les verbes au preterit, je pense qu'il y en a suffisamment.