Bonjour, es que quelqun pourrai me corriger mes fautes?

Hello! My name is Marion. I am 20. I live in Paris.

My association name is a child by the hand. It's to was founded by Jean Pierre Cabouat in 1990. We intervene in Africa, Latin America and Asia. The ain of this NGO is to provide assistance to children of unprivilized families. The idea is to be the patron of these children for 10 years. We organize small projects like for exemple we build schools, centre health, well in the countries defavorized.

One day when I watched the news, there was a report about the children of african countries.We saw a school that had just been built by volunteers and the children who discovered with amazement. The involvement of all these people in the construction of a school in the ain to make the children smile at me enormously affected. I decided from that moment I involved in this association.

We regularly organize events to make themselves known to the public, to have the greatest chance of having new members.We also distribute flyers inviting people to sponsor children. Every month we meet to take stock of the number of donators.

Join us, children need you.

Do not hesitate to make a donation.

During the demonstrations, come and support our cause.

For more information about our association, please call:0475862103

MERCI d'avance de votre aide.

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2013-04-07T12:38:36+02:00

Hello! My name is Marion. I am 20. I live in Paris.

My association name is a child by the hand. It's to were founded by Jean Pierre Cabouat in 1990. We intervene in Africa, Latin America and Asia. The idea of this NGO is to provide assistance to children of unprivileged families. The idea is to be the patron of these children for 10 years. We organize small projects like for example we building schools, centre health, well in the countries disadvantaged.

One day when I watched the news, there was a report about the children of african .We saw a school that had just been built by volunteers and the children who discovered with amazement. The involvement of all these people in the construction of a school in the ain to make the children smile at me enormously affected. I decided to help this association.


We regularly organize events to make themselves known to the public, to have the greatest chance of having new member .We also distribute flyers inviting people to sponsor children. Every month we meet to take stock of the number of donators.

 

 

Join us, Children need you.
Do not hesitate to make a donation.
During the demonstrations, come and support our cause.
For more information about our association, please call:0475862103

 

 

Voilà pour moi sa c'est correcte, je n'est pas relevé les fautes que j'ai corrigé ...