Bonsoir, pourriez vous me dire si ce texte est correct ( au niveau de l'expression )

Robert Nesta Marley better known as Bob Marley, was a singer, guitarist, songwritter from the ghettos of Jamaica He is the best known reggae musician of all times, famous for popularising the genre outside of Jamaica. Much of his work deals with the struggles of the impoverished and powerless. He has been called the Charles Wesley of the Rastafarian faith for the way he spread Rastafari through his music.




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