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Yesturday morning, around 7 o'clock a laddie went to work in car. When she take the left road, she was shocking, yes she has seen a boy down next to his car. She had called the Ambulance and descended of her car and she has placed her hand on the boy's bosom, he was died. When the police officer was comming, he has been interroged the laddie, she had said what was happened. After, the unité of N.C.I.S have came and searched clues.

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2013-03-27T18:59:06+01:00

Yesterday morning, around 7 o'clock a laddie went to work in car. When she take the left road, she was shocked, yes she has seen a boy down next to his car. She had called the Ambulance and descended of her car and she has placed her hand on the boy's bosom, he was dead. When the police officer arrived, he was  interrogated the laddie, she had said what was happened. After, the unity of N.C.I.S arrived and searched clues. 

 

Voila, en espérant t'avoir aidé :)

2013-03-27T19:15:52+01:00

Yesterday morning,around 7 o'clock a lady went to work in car.When she took the left road,she was shocked,yes she has seen a boy down next to his car.She called the ambulance and descended from her car and she has placed her and on the boy's bosom,he was dead.When the police officer was coming,he has been interrogating the lady,she said what has happened.

After,the unity of N.C.I.S had came and searched clues.

   Voila les corrections.