Bonjours, j'aurais besoins d'aide sur une expression écrite en anglais sur le discours direct et indirect et ou il faut bien conjuguer les verbes au prétérit simple ou au prétérit be - ing. Le sujet c''est inventer une histoire. Voila mon expression est-ce que vous pourriez corriger les fautes ? Hugo, Ron and Hermione were going for the holidays in the castle. The castle was at the Hermione's uncle but now he is dead. They were playing the ball in the deserted castle. They were very happy. Suddenly, Hermione was petrified she asked if they heard that. Ron and Hugo answer they didn't hear anythink but Hermione protested she heard noises next to the bedroom's uncle and that it's the gost of her uncle was here. Hugo laughted but Ron said they could go see in the bedroom. Hermione was not very agree and she replied if they were sure it's safe. Hugo answer that they were completely sure and the castle was safe. So they went to the bedroom's uncle when they heard an enormous noise. There were completely astonished. Ron was very bold and he said he went alone in the bedroom for looked if there are gost. Hugo and Hermiooone were agree. Suddenly, Hugo and Hermione heard ron laught. There were going in the bedroom and they saw the TV is put on !!!

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2013-03-20T16:21:47+01:00
Hermione was petrified so she ask.
Rien d'autres :)