Bonjour, pour mon devoir d'anglais je dois faire un exposé oral sur le thème de mon choix (j'ai choisis le Metal Gothique, chercher les infos et traduis comme j'ai pu à l'aide de mes propres connaissances et Google.) Or je pense avoir des fautes, beaucoup de faute. Est-ce que quelqu'un pourrait me les relever s'il vous plait ? Merci ^^. (Voilà ce que j'ai écris)

The Metal Gothic (or Goth Metal) is a type of musique is a mixture between Heavy Metal, Doom-Death and Gothic Musique. It was develloped in the middle of 1990 in Usa and in Europe. The Metal Gothic is often mingled with the group of Gothic Musique, Metal Symphonic for their rythmes sometimes ressembling, their vocal with voice of woman often and their subjects. The females voices in the group of Metal Gothic have popularize the songstress in the Metal Group. But all the groups of Metal who have a female vocal never aren't always a group of Metal Gothic ! The Metal Gothic is characterised by atmosphere melancholic, or romantic dark. The main groups have made this new type of metal are Paradise Lost, Theatre Of Tragedy and Type O Negative. The gothic move and the Metal Gothic unrelated. The gothic move is un type of musique who have their derived as Rock Gothic, Darkwawe, Post-punk. But Metal Gothic is a derived of Doom-Death and is a derived of Metal.

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Ça m'as l'air juste évite simplement de faire du franglais et ça va passer