Je te le réecris en enlevant quelques fautes ;-)
Met bien les majuscules et les ponctuations, comme moi :-)
My dear diary,
Friday, March 6th 2010
I was surprised when my sister said that she was pregnant with triplets. The November 6th was a great evenement, three small babies were born, two boys and one girl. Their name was : Thomas, Lily and Simon but they were born premature, at the end of the 5th months and half of pregnancy they were born and we passed 4 months at the hospital. It was very hard because we were afraid to lose them... I was moved and happy have nephews. I could carry Lily on March 6th 2009. I joy cried.
Goog bye my diary
Ton évènement est très bien raconté il y a peu de fautes d'orthographe.
Si c'est noté je pense que tu vas avoir une excellente note ;-)
J'espère t'avoir aider :-D