Bonjour j'ai une rédaction d'anglais a faire
Sujet : Ecrire un recit policier a l'aide d'illustrations
J'ai écrit ma rédaction et pouvez vous me dire si il y a des fautes d'orthograque et si la grammaire est correct ? Merci d'avance :)
The detective John Goodface, in afternoon was watching over two men in a car park at London with magnifying glasses. The professor Helmer was the more smaller than the man in front of him and he was wearing a coat brown . The other man was Charles Vorp, director of a large company. He had appealed at John Goodface for investigating on a society whom him was doing competition for find confidentials and compromising informations. Helmer had just loaded to bring the bag containing the informations on the society. It had risked because nobody should know Charles did call a detective.
Althought John was watching over Helmer and Charles and the surrondings for to make sure the transaction was spending right, few minutes later the start of them conversation, a man appeared in front of the parking. He opened a trap door and he placed a detonator in. They had been spot ..
Suddenly John saw him he look suprised and puzzled. He ran in a park car for save the professor Helmer. The car park exploded but the three men escaped a murder attempt thanks to John Goodface and because they had flung on a inflatable playground.
The man must has been the employee of the company where Goodface investigate, he didn't want Charles has acces at informations confidantials on the society
One day after the murder attempt the director of a competition company and the man whom did the murder attempt was on a prison.