J'ai traduis le texte et je voulais savoir si j'avais des faute de traduction . C'est pour cela que je souhaiterais que quelqu'un me le corrige .
Texte en Français :
Cher mére et pére,
Vous savez surement pourquoi je vous écris cette lettre vu ma tristesse après le déménagement . Et bien je souhaiterais par dessus tout retourné dans mon ancienne ville et partir de cette campagne je vous en supplie .
Il y a beaucoup d'insectes et à cause de cela j'ai plein de boutons .
Ou nous sommes il n'y a aucune boutiques à par ceux qui sont loin de la maison à cause de ça je dois dépenser à chaque fois une fortune pour prendre le bus et vous utilisez systématiquement la voiture ce ui fait que vous polluez et gaspillez beaucoup d'essence . Que ce soit pour se rendre à son travail, aller à la poste, à la boulangerie ou faire les courses, tout ce dont nous avons besoin est généralement éloigné du domicile, ce qui nous fait passer pas mal de temps dans la voiture chaque jour
Je n'ai aucune amie, je ne connée personnes ici . Je m'ennuie totalement il n'y a pas de cinéma, piscine ou restaurants.
En ville j'ai laissée tout mes amis et je voudrait les revoir je t'en pris ils me manque beaucoup .
Je pouvais me connecter à internet sans problème alors qu'à la campagne nous ne pouvons pas .
Et avant mon ancien lycée était à 3 minutes de notre ancienne demeure alors qu'à la campagne je dois .
Le paysage urbain me manque énormément, je vous demande à genoux de retourner de retourner en ville .

En anglais:

Dear mother and father,
You surely know why I write this letter considering my unhappiness to you after the removal. And well I would wish over very turned over in my old city and to leave this countryside I beg you. There are many insects and because of that I have full with buttons.
Where we are it does not have there no shops with by those which are far from the house because of that I must spend each time a fortune to take the bus and you use the car systematically with the result that you pollute and waste much petrol. That is to go to its work, to go to the post office, bakery or to do the shopping, all for which we require is generally far away from the residence, which makes us spend not bad time in the car each day.
I do not have any friend, I know people here. I am bored completely it does not have there a cinema, swimming pool or restaurants. Downtown I left all my friends and I in taken to you they I would like to re-examine them misses me much. I could connect me to Internet without problem whereas in the countryside we cannot.
And before my old high school was at 3 minutes of our old residence whereas in the countryside I must. Enormously I miss the urban landscape, I require of you of knees to turn over to turn over downtown.

Merci de me répondre au plus vite .



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2014-10-30T14:51:14+01:00
"Dear mother and father,

You surely know why I am writing you this letter : I am so sad because of our move. I wish so much return in my old city and leave this countryside, I beg you. There are many insects and because of that I have full spots.
Where we are the aren't any shop except those which are far from the house. So I must spend each time a lot of money in order to take the bus and you use consistenly the car. You contaminate our planet. We need to drive for everything : to go working, to the postoffice, to the bakery or shopping.
I haven't go any friend, I don't know anybody here. I am completly bored because there aren't any cinema, swimming pool or restaurant. I left all my friends and I would like to see them again, please, I miss them so much! Before I could connect me to the Internet without problem whereas in the countryside we can't.
And before my old high school was at 3 minutes of our old residence whereas in the countryside I must walk a long time. I miss the urban landscape a lot, I plead with you to return in the city.
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J'ai essayé de corriger un max, il y a sûrement encore des fautes. Evite de faire du copié-collé français/anglais surtout! Bonne chance.
Dear mother and father, You surely know why I'm writing this letter considering my unhappiness for you after the relocation. Well, I wish above all else I would come back into my old city and leave this countryside I beg you. There are many insects and because of that I'm full of buttons.
Where we are there's no shops except those which are far away from the house because of that I must spend each time a fortune to take the bus and you systematically use the car which makes that you pollute and waste too much petrol. Whether to go to work, go to the post office, bakery or shopping, everything we need is usually far away from home, which means we spend a lot of time in the car each day
I do not have friends, I know any one here. I'm completely bored there is not cinema, swimming pool or restaurants. In town I left all my friends and I want to see them, please, i miss them so much. I could connect me to Internet without problem whereas in the countryside we cannot. Before my old high school was at 3 minutes of our old residence whereas in the countryside I must ( Ici tu as oublié dans le texte français la suite )
I miss the urban landscape enormously, I ask you on my knees to come back downtown.
Voila j'ai corrigé le plus possible et oui faut éviter le copier coller francais anglais..