J'aimerais savoir si j'ai bon svp merci :
His n'aime is Sam Smith, he is English and he is twenty-two years old. He isn't married and he haven't got any children. His best album is "In the Lonely Hour". Hi famous song is "stay with me", his style of music is Pop, R&B and Soul. He is a singer and he compose music. His latest new is release a new song, which name is "restart". He has got twitter, Facebook and Instagram to communicate with his fans and to write posts.
Merci pour votre aide :)

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non c'est "He has" puisque c'est la 3eme personne du singulier.
on dit ne pas être marié pas ne pas faire marié ... c'est is''y
isn't
merci
c'est he has got

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2014-10-30T14:28:19+01:00
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2014-10-30T15:20:11+01:00
His name is Sam Smith. He is a twenty-two years english guy. He isnt married and hasn'got any kids . The name of his best album is " The Lonely Hour" and his most famous song is "Stay With Me". Pop, R'n  B and Soul are the style of music he likes.. He is a singer-composer and he has just got out a new song 'Restart'. Of course, he communicates with his fans on social networks as Twitter, Facebook and Instagram ond so he can post news about him.

A part 1 ou 2 fautes comme "he haven't got", j'ai juste voulu rendre ton texte plus fluide qu"une succession de phrases les unes aptès les autres.
En espérant que ça te plaise...............