Bonjours , c'est une page d'un journal de bord
parlant d'un trappeur. J'ai déjà vérifié plusieurs fois mes erreurs j'aurais besoin de vos avis.
Pouvez-donc
m'aider à corriger mes erreurs ?
Merci

It was sunny, the thermometer about 17 degrees. I got dressed and had breakfast. That day, I went trade with Indian. I took my bag, my snowshoes and my rifle.
I walked through the woods and I saw raccoons, beavers and foxes. I decided to set new trap. I had seen a lot of coyotes on the other side of the river, I would stay here tomorrow and I would build a raft to go to get my traps. I go up to see the smoke of the Indian tribe. I traded furs and bones with these Indians were not hostile.
On the way back I heard a noise coming from a bush I got closer and saw a wolf, I prepared my gun but I stop every sequence when I saw three cubs. It was a mother and I just could not let these little abbatre and mourrirent hungry. So I continue my way up to my cabin and I ended my day by preparing new traps for the next day.


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2014-10-28T15:30:03+01:00
It was sunny, the temperature was about 17 degrees. I got dressed and had breakfast. That day, I went hunting  with an Indian. I took my bag, my snowshoes and my rifle.
I walked through the woods and I saw raccoons, beavers and foxes. I decided to set a new trap. I had seen lot of coyotes on the other side of the river, I would stay there  the next day  and  build a raft  and set the traps.  Then went  up to see the smoke coming out of the huts of the Indian tribes. I traded furs and bones with these Indians, and they were not hostile.
On the way back I heard a noise coming from a bush, and when I got closer I saw a wolf, I prepared to shoot but  stopped  when I saw three cubs. It was a mother and I just could not kill it  and put these cubs in hunger. So I continue my way to my cabin and  finish my day by preparing new traps for the next day.