Bonjour pouvez vous corriger mes fautes svp
merci


All the inhabitants are yet in shock of the big earthquake which has devastated Haïti, an isle situated in the Caraïbes, yesterday in the evening. The schools, the houses and other buildings were all destroyed. It remains just big piles of rubble preventing the intervention of rescues.
So, thousands Haïtians have all wasted and found themselves homeless.
the earthquake was horrible, people were in a terrible panic. Today, they are disrupted and in dire straits. Striked already by poverty, this event will more aggravate the situation of Haïti.

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2014-10-19T16:51:15+02:00
All the inhabitants are yet in shock of the big earthquake which has devastated Haïti, an isle situated in the Caraïbes, yesterday in the evening. The schools, the houses and other buildings were all destroyed. It remains just big piles of rubble preventing the intervention of rescues.
So, thousands Haïtians have all wasted and found themselves homeless.
the earthquake was horrible, people were in a terrible panic. Today, they are disrupted and in dire straits.Striker already by poverty, this event will more aggravate the situation of Haïti.
daccord merci
ya pas de quoi... si tu as d'autres problème n'hésite pas a me demander...
ok mais sinon tu es sur quil ny a aucune autre faute parce que je suis nulle en anglais et je suis etonné de navoir que 1 faute
recopie le texte que j'ai écrit sa sera plus simple...
A part strike,c'est le même que le sien......!!!! peux tu regarder mes commentaires sur la réponse de RubkXcube un peu plus haut pour le même exo et me dire ce que t'en penses, stp. Merci.