Pouvez vous me corriger ce texte svp je ne m'y connait pas trop en anglais et c'est noté merci d'avance

Hello everyone , as you may already know , my name is Victoria Bianchi and I am here today because I am running in the election of class representatives .I am very familiar with the work of delegate since I was last year. Why choose me? Just because I 'm very motivated and I 'm not afraid of public speaking . I think those are important qualities to successfully assume the role of Associate . I also know I'm missing a lot of qualifications, but after all no one is perfect and it is being delegated I could erase these defects.

If I want to become is already delegated and foremost because I am able to represent the class and also because I 'd like everyone passes the 4th best year possible.
I 'll tell you about my agenda.
I will be at your disposal throughout the year and more before each class council . I am committed not only to represent our class and to mediate meetings but also to defend the class council . This means that if you have any requests , suggestions , comments or criticisms , I will undertake to provide management and teachers. Sure, I 'll spare you my email address to contact me if needed .
If I am elected I will move first, creating the worry box online . You may leave all your problems related to classroom life I will try also to settle with the utmost discretion . In the worry box you can also put Ideas , Quick Tips , Proposals and even reviews .
Secondly, I would like to create a log for the class that would inform the rest of the school on projects and news about the class, see the college.

Finally , my goal will be to improve the welfare of all students in the class . So everyone can feel at ease.
Thank you for your attention.
I hope you will vote for me! Good luck to all candidates !

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2014-10-17T09:51:21+02:00
If I want to become is already delegated and foremost because I am able to represent the class and also because I 'd like everyone passes the 4th best year possible. qu'est ce que tu veux dire soit clair ecrit en francais je t'aiderai..

Hello everyone , as you already know , my name is Victoria Bianchi and I am here today because I am running in the election of class representatives .As you may already know, I am very familiar with the work since I was a delegate last year. Why choose me? Just because I 'm very motivated and I 'm not afraid of public speaking . I think these are some among the important qualities to successfully assume the role of Associate . I also know that I have a few lacking, but after all no one is perfect and maybe being delegated could help me correct these defects. If I want to become a delegated is not only because I want to represent the class but also because I 'd like everyone spend their 4th best year in the best waypossible. I 'll tell you about my agenda. I will be at your disposal throughout the year and more before each class council . I am committed not only to represent our class and to mediate meetings but also to defend the class council . This means that if you have any requests , suggestions , comments or criticisms , I will undertake to provide management and teachers. Sure, I 'll spare you my email address to contact me if needed . If I am elected I will move first, creating the worry box online . You may leave all your problems related to classroom life which I will try to settle with utmost discretion . In the worry box you can also put Ideas , Quick Tips , Proposals and even reviews . Secondly, I would like to create a log for the class that would inform the rest of the school on projects and news about the class, see the college. Finally , my goal will be to improve the welfare of all students in the class . So everyone can feel at ease. Thank you for your attention. I hope you will vote for me! Good luck to all candidates !
 

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