Bonjour, j'aimerais qu'une personne me corrige s'il y a des fautes

(à mon avis y'en a beaucoup)

Merci



- I chose <<PROJECT RUNWAY> as TV programme because I love fashion design.

- I can sew and I read lot of books on this. I have already produce clothing with my aunt.

- I listen music for draw inspirations and have a rest.

- I'd like to create other clothing which will know worldwide even ifI doubt a little about my professional succes.

- I like work in groups and as regards my hobbies, I often dscuss with friends and maje cakes.

- I'm verry greedy and optimistic. I hate be disturbed.

- My parents works in the textile.



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2014-10-12T16:12:13+02:00

-I chose to talk about ' Project Runway' TV program because i love
 fashion designing.- I can sew and I read lot of books on this(Fashion). I have already made clothes  with my aunt. - I listen  to music when i need  inspirations for drawing or rest.- I'd like to create clothes which will  be known worldwide even if I doubt a little about my professional succes.- I like working in groups. I often discuss with  my friends  about my hobby while making cakes. - I'm very greedy and optimistic. I hate to be disturbed.- My parents works in the textile
2014-10-12T16:13:59+02:00
- I chose <<PROJECT RUNWAY> as TV programme because I love fashion design.
  - I can sew and I read lot of books on this. I have already produce clothing with my aunt.
  - I listen music for draw inspirations and have a rest.
 - I'd like to create other clothing which will know worldwide even if doubt a little about my professional success.
  - I like work in groups and as regards my hobbies, I often discuss with friends and make cakes.
 - I'm very greedy and optimistic. I hate be disturbed.
- My parent’s works in the textile.