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Her name is Vandemaele Héléa , She is Belgian and Ivoria , She is 13 years old , she was born on May 1St , 2001 in Lyon , she leaves in Basse Ville , she has got doesn't brotheurs and sisters but she has got dog. She likes shopping and she dislikes reading books , she has hobbies after scool is dancing , she has black eyes and black hair small ,she is favourite colors is purple , she is tall and thin. she is not very messy she is extremely talkive , not lazy at all , she is quite polite and very hardworking.
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*she lives, *she hasn't got any brothers or sisters but she has a dog ,*after school she likes dancing,*black short hair,*her favourite color is purple,*she's not so messy but she's extremely talkative j'ai corrigé tout ce que j'ai vu par contre des fois remplace she par son nom car sa fais beaucoup de répétiton :)
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2014-10-08T19:45:56+02:00
Her name is Vandemaele Héléa,she is Belgian and Ivorian ,she is 13 years old , she was born on the May 1st 2001 in Lyon.
She lives in Basse ville .
She hasn't got brothers and sisters but she has got a dog , she likes shopping and she dislikes reading books.
her hobbies after school is dancing.she's got black eyes and short black hair.
Her favourite colour is purple .she is tall and thin.She is not messy at all ,she is extremely talkative ,she is not lazy at all , she is quit polite and she's very hardworking.
2014-10-08T20:50:27+02:00

Her name is Vandemaele Héléa , she is belgian and ivoria , she is 13 years old , she was born on first may, 2001 in Lyon , she leaves in Basse Ville , she has doesn't  brothers and sisters but she has a dog. She likes shopping and she dislikes reading books , she has hobbies after scool is dancing , she has black eyes and black hair small ,she is favourite colors is purple , she is tall and thin. She is not very messy ,she is extremely talkive , doesn't lazy at all , she is quite polite and very hardworking.