Bonjour, serait-il possible que quelqu'un me corrige mes fautes , c'est pour demain et pourriez vous me donner des mots de liaisons a mettre dans mon texte svp merci
My project is teaching orphans inAfrica. I will takes part in education of orphans in Africa. I will learn to read their because some have never hold book in their hands and I will learn how to make their drama. I adore doing theater and I' m eating a book. What i mean is like taking care a childrenand i would their bring attention then I would like discover another culuture and another customs. So, I can be extremely patient and fresh. i mean, I can be flexible and I can be creative and i should be couse artistic. I am willing to give my time if you see what I mean for to help these orphans that build a future. I will create a theater i play and I'll have to reading stories. I think it is important to volunteer because it open our minds and we can to develop new skills. I'll have to face is being in contac with African children because they have not received eductation and I think they are affraid yo overseas. Then I will have to face poverty, hungerand diseases and children sadness.

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2014-10-05T14:11:47+02:00
My project is teaching orphans inAfrica. I will take part in education of orphans in Africa. I will learn their how to read because some have never hold book in their hands and I will learn how to make their drama. I adore doing theater and. What i mean is like taking care of children and i would their bring attention then I would like to discover another culture and another customs. So, I can be extremely patient and fresh. i mean, I can be flexible and I can be creative and i should be also artistic. I am willing to give my time if you see what I mean for helping these orphans to build their future. I will create a theater i play and I'll have to reading stories. I think it is important to be volunteer because it opens our minds and we can develop new skills. I'll have to face is being in contac with African children because they have not received eductation and I think they are afraid.Then I will have to face poverty, hungerand diseases and children sadness. 

mots de liaison et autres expressions utiles: Then also, after, I can add, I find interesting to ...

Je ne sais pas si j'ai totu corrigé mais comme ça, ça me semble bien..
C'est pas une activité dans le livre de 1ereS d'Anglais ? 
2014-10-05T14:18:41+02:00
"I will take part"
"I will learn how to teach reading because some orphans has never hold a book in their hands and i will learn how to teach dramatic art ... 
"and I love reading books."
(attention: les expressions françaises n'ont pas de traduction anglaise au mot à mot)
"What I mean is that I like taking care of children and I would bring their attentions, furthermore, I would like to discover...."
Moreover, I can be extremely patient and cool...
I can be flexible and creative too .(éviter les répétitions "i can be, i can be") 
if you see what I mean in order to help these orphans and building a bright future for them"
My project is to create a theater, to play as an actor and reading stories too!.
...it's important to be a volunteer because...
...and we can develop new skills...
What i will have to face is being in contact with african children because some of them need a foreign education. 
And also, i will have to face poverty ...

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