Bonjour,
Je dois faire une lettre sur ma famille d'acceuil d'Ottawa mais je ne suis vraiment pas doué en anglais j'aurais donc besoin de votre aide: pour me corrigé( j'ai numérotés les lignes pour éviter que vous recopier) me donner des propositions
Je dois dans cette lettres remercier la famille pour son invitation
-Me présenté nom age famille lieu où j'habite études gouts, activités,loisirs ect
-Montrer mon intéret pour Ottawa et le Canada.
-Poser des questions sur la famille, la ville, les activités, etc.min 5 j'en ai 2
-Montrer l’intérêt de ce type de séjour.

Dear Mr and Mrs
My name is Tiffany ******** , I am 15 years old. Have got one brother Thomas, he's 17 years old and one sister Myriam, she's 10 years old. My father is Fabrice and my mother is Corinne. I'm living Toulouse. I'm very fond of horse therefore I do ride a horse since 6 years.
5) I'm now in classe 2nd in ******. I am find very beautiful Canada en automn because winter it is cold but summer it is hot. I woul like visiteg to museum of aviation and space Canada. Is possible of lease a boat for went to the rideau canal? I like to visited Parliament Hill but i don't no if this is feasible! It is feasible? This stay in you allow myself improve my level en English.And to discover nem landscapes, new, people.
10)Thank you very much for your e-mail. I can't wait to you met.
Sincerely yours.
Charlotte

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2014-10-01T18:05:58+02:00
L 2 : met plutôt un I devant have got L 4 pas de do dis juste i ride horse ... L 6 i think Canada is very beautiful in autumn because in winter, it is cold and in summer it is hot. L6 like visited L10 to meet you Ce sont les seules erreurs que j'ai trouve dans ton texte
En therme de traduction c'est correct en anglais pas trop de is de a on arrive facilement à comprendre ce que j'ai mis ?
T'as inversé des mots donc....
Meilleure réponse !
2014-10-01T19:07:55+02:00
I have got.....My father's name is , mi mother's name is.....I  live IN Toulouse....
horses there fore I'm riding since six years.Canada is really beautiful in Autumn but I couldn't be there in winter; it's too cold, I would freeeze!!!!! And ,in summer, I've been told that it was very hot. Is it??....Do you have any children? What hobbies do you have? I would like to know a little bit more about you (if you leane in the city ot outside etc... I'm very curios, isn't.
I would like to visit the Canadian Space and Aviation'museum in Ottawa. Is it possible to make a trip on the "Canal Rideau" .I know that in winter , you can even skate on it and that it is a Unesco world heritage site.Woul it be possible as well to visit "The Parliament Hill". I' ve heard that many events were happening there during the year. 
This stay vith you is reallly going to improve my english and as well, I''m going to discover a new country, new landcapes, a new way of living and eating maybe!
I'm really impatient to meet you.
Thank you so much for your e_mail. I can't stand meeting you.

Voilà compte tenu des consignes j'ai ajouté 2 ou 3 choses en tenant compte de ton texte biensûr
J' espère que ça t'ira
Good luck



je viens de me relire :I'M HORSE RIDING;;;sorry
Merci beaucoup j'espère que grâce a toi j'aurai une bonne note
j'espère aussi, tiens moi au courant. Attention , je me suis aperçue que j'avais fait des fautes de frappe : mY mother's , (if you live in the city ot outside etc....I'm very CURIOUS? isn'it§
isn'it!!! Is it possible to make a boat trip on the "Canal Rideau"?.....Would it...this stay With you is really....Les touches de mon ordi sont un peu fatiguées et j'ai paumé mes lunettes!!!!! BONNE CHANCE