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My invention is the shoes with interchangeable heels. It's amazing because thanks to it women can change their heels on the same shoes.
I will be speaking about the following subjects. firstly, how it works, then the advantages and inconvenients . To finish I'll give you my personal opinion.These shoes are useful to women who can thus insert the heels of their choice. They can also put a heel on the front of the shoes to create their own style.

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voila la suite de mon oral:
With it we can change the colors, the height and the material of their heels. These shoes enables to avoid injuries when you need to hurry because you can remove the heels in 2 seconds.
However you can change only heels. So we must think about the color of shoes you want to buy!
In my opinion these shoes are awesome because you can change heels to match your outfit and have unique shoes.
So heels united fancy studded, needles, chunky, of leather, plastic or wood make your choice!
esce bien ou y a t-il des fautes?

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2014-10-01T14:28:05+02:00
My invention is shoes with interchangeable heels. It's amazing because thanks to it, women can change their heels on the same type of shoes.
I will be speaking about the following subjects. Firstly, how it works, and then the advantages and inconvenients . As a conclusion, I'll give you my personal opinion. These shoes are useful to women who can thus insert the heels of their choice. They can also put a heel on the front of the shoes to create their own style.


J'ai modifié quelques détails, mais dans l'ensemble c'est bien.