Je l'ai fais moi et je suis en 3eme moi j'ai fais sa :

I went to Ardeche with my family,
It was a fantastic holliday.
I went on 16th July, i swam in the Ardeche.
I like this city because it's verry hot !
I enjoy this holliday because it was funny and cool !

Voilà c'est pas mal