Dear Maret
Hi Maret I am in London is a big town. The weather is sunny . I stayed in a hotel . Yesterday,I visited the Tower of London . I loved it . Last week I went and sow Big Ben . This morning , I ate real English breakfast:bacon and eggs,beans,tomatoes and toasts. I had fun ! 10 days ago I played football , I flew on a plane, I listen to music ,I bought some jewelry ,I wrote postcards to my mother , I watched TV and I slept because I was tired ! The second day I drank orange juice , I met a fren , I took pictures with her . I swam at the beach but I didn't do my homework .

Vous pouvez me corriger s'il vous plait!!

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2014-06-14T20:51:33+02:00
Dear Maret 
Hi Maret I am in London, it is a big town. The weather is sunny . I stayed in a hotel . Yesterday,I visited the Tower of London . I loved it . Last week I went and saw Big Ben . This morning , I ate real English breakfast:bacon and eggs,beans,tomatoes and toasts. I had fun ! 10 days ago I played football , I flew on a plane, I listen to music ,I bought some jewelry ,I wrote postcards to my mother , I watched TV and I slept because I was tired ! The second day I drank orange juice , I met a friend , I took pictures with her . I swam in the sea but I didn't do my homework .

Je ne suis pas un expert en anglais, il y a peut être encore des fautes : )
Merci , beaucoup :)