J'ai vraiment besoin de votre aide!! Je dois parler de mon sport (la danse) pendant 4 min.On peut parler d'absolument tout en rapport avec la danse. j'ai déjà fait ça mais ça dure que 4 min. Pourriez vous m'aider a finir?
Merci beaucoup beaucoup, plein de coeurs ♥♥♥


I’m going to talk about my sport, dance.
I practice dance all the Monday, after school. I do dance jazz, ballet dance and street jazz. Twice in a year, I do a show and I makes competitions of dance one or two times a year. I practice this sport since I am three years old and I love that!
Ballet dance was created at the 18th century; it was called ballet of court but there are dances since the prehistory to honor the gods. Now, there are lots of different types of dance (traditional, contemporary…).
Fauve Otto is a famous dancer who participates has dance with the stars and who going to present an emission on the channel E! and she has also participated has short films.
To practice dance you need to have a shorty or one leggings and ballet slippers.
By making some dance we can become a choreographer, a dancer professional, professor of dance... And if we are really really good we can go to the opera of bets to become a principal dancer. Of course, it’s very hard.
There are lots of movies who talk about dance; black swan, Billy Elliot, dirty dancing, fame… But the most famous is red mill.

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ba c'est bon ta tous se qui te faux
nn c'est trop court je dosi parler pendant 4 min et la meme en parlant lentement ca en dure 2
a ok ba dit que c plus que ta passion que si tu arrete de dancer c comme si tu arrete de respirer
que quand tu dance tu oublies tout les moqueries des gens les regard des gens et tu proyuves au gens que tu est bien plus que "scream"
okey merci

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I’m going to talk to you about the sport that I do – it’s dancing.  I have dance every Monday after school. The dance school is_______________ (soit) near my school, in my school, around from my house.  I get there by bus, foot, my mother drives me… I do all sorts of different dance classes.  We do jazz, ballet and street jazz or hip hopp. Twice a year, our school does a performance.  Throughout the year we go to competitions.  Usually they are in my town, or we have to travel. I have been dancing since I was three years old and I love it! My most favourite dance style is __________.   Ballet was created in the 18th century; it was called “ballet de la  court” but there have been dances since prehistory to honour the gods. Now, there are lots of different styles of dance (traditional, contemporary…). Fauve Otto is a famous dancer who participates ?? She has danced with the stars and is going to present a television programme on channel E! and she has also been in a few short films. For dance classes you need to wear something that you can easily move in.  For example you need to have a shorty or leggings and ballet slippers.   If you want to work in the dance world you can become a choreographer, a professional dancer, a dance professor.    And if we are really really good you can go to the opera to become a principal ballerina.  Of course, it’s very hard.  When you go to the opera you are very young and these dancers are called “the rats”.   There are lots of movies who talk about dance; “Black swan”, “Billy Elliot”, dirty dancing, fame… But the most famous is the red mill.  My most favourite film is _______