Bonjour j'ai écrit se texte en anglais que je doit apprendre pour mon oral, j'aurais besoin que quelqu'un me le corrige svp Merci :)
We flew to Geneva airport at six in the
morning. We arrived at eight o'clock and we took the bus to the city
center. Then we went to the hotel. We are went to the most famous
market in Barcelona then we had free time for shopping. We are went
to the restaurant where we celebrate the anniversary of Leo. The next
day we went sum sightseeing tourist bus, we saw the Sagrada Familia.
We visit the Guell Park. In the evening we went to sum ​​or
restaurant we ate paella. Then we are gone clubbing or we danced
until five in the morning. The next day we went to visit the sum
Gothic Quarter. Then we are back to the hotel for our business
recovered. Then we are left at the airport returned to Geneva.

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problème : tu prends l'avion pour Genève et tu visites le marché de Barcelone????????? Ou alors tu vas de Genève à Barcelone?Explain please
pas we are went mais we went seulement

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2014-06-01T13:30:57+02:00
We flew to Geneva airport at six o'clock ammorning. We arrived at eight o'clock and we took the bus to the city. Then we went to the hotel. We have seen the most famousmarket in Barcelona then we had free time for shopping. We are wentto the restaurant where we celebrate the anniversary of Leo. Tomorrow,  we will sightseeing tourist bus, we will see the Sagrada Familia.
2014-06-01T16:14:05+02:00
We flew from Geneva airport at six in the morning. We arrived at eight (ou we arrived two hours later) and we took a bus to the city center. Then we left our luggage at the hotel (c'est pour éviter went trop souvent, mais we went to the hotel est correct). We went to the most famous market of/in (pas sûr) Barcelona and we had free time for shopping.We went to the restaurant where we celebrateD Leo's birthday. The next day, we went on a sightseeing tour bus (sum : je comprends pas) and we saw the 'Sagrada Familia' and  visiteD the Guell Park.In the evening, we ate a paella in a restaurant (encore sum??).Then we went clubbing and danced until five in the morning (ou 5 am). The last (pour éviter de répéter next et je pense que c'est le dernier jour) day we went for a walk in (we walked around se promener)  the Gothic Quarter (toujours sum et tjs pas compris!!)
We came back to the hotel to get our luggage and took the bus back to the airport to fly back to Geneva.
J'ai essayé de faire des phrases moins répétitives. On peut faire mieux mais ça va t'embrouiller. Explique-moi "sum" je comprends pas! pour moi sum=somme , calcul ou to sum up = pour résumer..............
J' espère t'avoir aidée