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Sujet:
Do you like detective stories ( films,
books, séries ). Why or Why not ? Use examples to justify. 120/150
words.





If
you asked me the question “ Do you “ like detective stories. I
would answer that I'm very keen on detective stories but there are a
lot of sorts of detective stories and ( rather talk about TV séries
with detectives. ) So what's my favourite TV detective séries ?

Well
the séries which I préfer watching is “ Mentalist ” . I'm fond
of the main character Patrick Jane. He is medium tall and he has got
curly blond hair and he has got green eyes . He looks really cool.

I
remember my favourite épisode : A contrecoeur, Here is the summary
of this episode: The corpse of a young woman is dug up during the
launch of a real estate project. The team of CBI inquiry, constrained
to be followed by a TV crew by order of the Deputy Attorney General.
In
conclusion, I enjoy watching “ Menatlis “ it is my favourite kind
of detective story, because I like Patrick Jane he is very strange
and very strong.

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2014-05-31T20:58:58+02:00
If you asked me the question “ Do you“ (JE NE COMPRENDS PAS ) like detective stories. Iwould answer that I'm very FOND OF detective stories but there are lots of detective stories and rather talk about TV sérieswith detectives.  So what's my favourite detective serie?  
Well the serie which I prefer watching is “ Mentalist ” . I really like the main character Patrick Jane. He is medium tall and he has got curly blond hair and he has got green eyes . So he looks really cool.
I remember my favourite épisode : Let me sum up this one. The corpse of a young woman is discovered during thelaunch of a real estate project. The team of CBI inquiry, constrainedto be followed by a TV crew by order of the Deputy Attorney General.
In conclusion, I enjoy watching “ Mentalist “ it is my favourite kindof detective story. Not only because I like Patrick Jane but also because he is very strange and very strong.