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The studies in other contry open apportunity to discover new horizon, new culture. It interressing to learn differents way of life. This gives us a bigger oppen-midedness and caraticism sense on way what make in France ( It is diffrent according to contry ).Then this permit to be bilingue. It is clearer to learn the language is necessary to practice le language, so why not go at the country for speak and listent the language evryday. In the profesional point learn a language which are diffrent of our ease the hierarchical incluse. For a futur profesion it permit to acquire a good CV. Indeed the boss hire someone that he have lot of experience, a replet and original CV that someone who make a traditional studies. This last have not anything benefics for the entreprise. And thus the boss will tourn toword someone more atterest of the profesional point. Go aboard can allow widen the social reseau, that is contact in share capital form.

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2014-06-03T16:59:29+02:00
Y a plein de fautes, je t'ai tout corrigé.

Studying in another country is an opportunity to discover new horizons, new cultures. It is interesting to learn different ways of life.It may help us to be more open-minded and critical against what happens  in France ( It is different depending on the country ). Then, it allows us to become bilingual. It is clear that learning a language it is necessary to practice the language. So why not going to a country in order to speak and listen to the language everyday? Professionally speaking, learning a language which is different from his own one provide more opportunities in term of jobs. For a future profession, it permits to acquire a good CV. Indeed the boss hires someone that he have lot of experience, a replet and original CV than a CV of a person who makes traditional studies - which has not any benefits for the entreprise. Thus, the boss will prefer someone more interesting, with more skills and competencies. Going abroad can help widen the social network, that is contact in share capital form.