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My favourite actor is Brad Pitt , it's starred in Inglourious , fight club , world war z , His real name is "Wiliam bradley pitt" He is a nationality americain and he was born the december 18 1963 a younger :"He participated in the school's Key and Forensics clubs, in school debates, and in musicals. Following his graduation from high school, Pitt enrolled in the University of Missouri in 1982, majoring in journalism with a focus on advertising. As graduation approached, Pitt did not feel ready to settle down. He loved films—"a portal into different worlds for me"—and, since films were not made in Missouri, he decided to go to where they were made.[8] Two weeks before earning his degree, Pitt left the university and moved to Los Angeles, where he took acting lessons and worked odd jobs."He is married with angelina jolie , they have 6 chlidren.Brad pitt is the sort action movies . I've a seen 3 movies .I like then because a good movies with a beautiful story

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2014-05-23T18:37:37+02:00
Alors Voila Les Petites Erreurs Que J'ai Trouver:
*He's nationality american (Ligne 2)
*He was born on 18 december 1963. When he was young he participated ...
*I like HIM because his mouvies are good and they have a beautiful story
(je n'ait absolument pas comprit ta phrase "Brad pitt is the sort action movies" mais je ne pence pas qu'elle veuille dire quelque chose, dit moi en français ce que tu voulais dire)
Bon voila les erreurs que j'ai trouver, j’espère ne pas en avoir oublier :)
Pour la derniere phrase la question c'est : What sort of acteur are they ?
Donc j'ai voulu dire il est du genre action ... (un truc comme ça )
Sinon merci beaucoup ;)
"He is a action actor" serais surement mieux :) Derien ;)