SVP aidez moi !!
j'ai un devoirs noté dans le quel nous devons présenter des villes que nous avons déjà visité en utilisant le "présent perfect" et " le prétérit"
Pourriez vous me dire si ses deux textes suivant sont juste? merci d'avance :)

" I have been to Paris there is 4 years ago on train,
i visited the Eiffel tower, and there was wonderful
i have been in an restaurant, i have eaten shrimp,
and finally i was visited a meusum and took pictures."


" I was visited NewYork City ,
there is 5 years ago,
i saw a differents tower
i have been in museum, and i was visited the Time Square
this, was one of my dreams. "


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2014-05-14T13:30:33+02:00
I have been to Paris 4 years ago by train,
I visited the Eiffel Tower, and it was wonderful,
I went to a restaurant and I ate shrimp,
and finally I visited a museum and took pictures

I visited New York City 5 years ago, 
I saw different towers, I've been to museums and I've been to Time Square and 
this was one of my dreams.
Voilà ;)


And i ate SHRIMPS! desole je me suis trompée