We have left the middle
school by sad weather. We were very impatient to leave but the
farewells with the parents were difficult for some persons because some left their
family for the first time! We have crossed Annecy. During this time of the
road, everybody found an activity: listen to some music, read, discuss,
nibble, play cards...The evening, we have eaten our picnic on a highway
station, we have looked at the movie "the son of the mask" in the bus. I had already seen the movie before. Nobody wanted to sleep, we were so incited...It has rained all the journey.
Ton devoir est assez bien pour l'instant avec une bonne utilisation du present perfect, continue ainsi. Tout de fois, fait attention aux erreurs "bêtes" d'oublis ...