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Il s'agit d'une description d'une peinture



This
document is a painting it was painted by Norman Rockwell in 1967.
The
scene takes place in the residence, during the day.
In
the foreground there are a lamp, sofa, rug and a table and In the
middle on the left side I can see two children and a cat and on the
rights side there are three children and a dog.
Behind
them on the right side there are a moving van and a man.
In
the background on the left I can see a row of houses that resemble
and there is a yellow car that is parked.
The
residence is mainly lined with lawns and planting near houses.






There
is a lot of green and yellow on the painting, the houses are yellow,
the car and the couch and the lamp.
There
are lots of green lawn and there are also green plants around homes.
In
the middle on the left, there are two children, a girl and a boy who
have black skin.
The
boy is wearing a white sweater and long white socks with shorts
scratch black, white and gray with white and gray trainers he holds
in his hand a baseball glove.



The
girl who is smaller than the boy is wearing a dress and pink socks,
she braided hair and a pink nodes with black shoes. She holds in her
arms a white cat.



In
front of there are children: two boys and a girl most tall wearing a
yellow sweater, jeans and a white and beige shoes glove to receive
the ball in baseball his hair are brown, a dog is sitting beside him.



At
his side there is another boy who has blonde hair and wears a white
cap and a white and blue outfit with brown trainers.




There
is a little girl behind who wearing a beige sweater, white socks,
black shoes and black shorts. Her hair is tied.

Children
watch and insists we seem to want to know and play together as
animals are observed, they all seem curious
The
mover has white skin, it is brown discharging and a black suitcase.
His truck is old and white with blue writing and other black. He
concentrated on the air in his work.
I
think that black children have moved because the truck is directed
towards them.







merci de votre aide :)


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ce cher norman rockwell... je suis désolé mais je n'ai plus le courage de faire de description pour aujourd'hui néanmoins ton travail m'a l'air correct mais après il faut savoir les exigences de ton prof
je cherche pas à ce que tu m'aides je cherche juste que tu me corriges les fautes d'orthographes

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2014-04-26T06:41:42+02:00
This  is a painting drawn by Norman Rockwell in 1967. The scene took  place in the residence, during the day. In the foreground there is  a lamp, a sofa, a rug and a table and In the middle left, there are  two children and one cat and then  on the right side there are three children and a dog. Behind them on the right side there are a moving van and a man. In the background on the left I can see a row of houses that resemble and there is a yellow car that is parked. T