Je n'arrive vraiment pas à faire cet exercice; pouvez-vous m'aider please s'il vous plaît ?

Je suis mauvaise en anglais, c'est pour cela que j'ai besoin de votre aide.

Merci pour vos réponses..

Voici la consigne:

Write a few lines now:

Look at the card summing up Coldplay's involvement in charities.

Write a short paragraph about what they have done and how.



COLDPLAY

British Rock band since 1996

-Help Hurricane Katrina victims financially/record a charity single wirem Micheal Stipe.

-Support Amnesty International and Cancer Active/gice 10% of their profits.

-Ask that any gift intended for them are donated to charity.

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2014-04-24T21:09:54+02:00
Cold Play have been one of the most famous British rock band since 1996. Since then, they have helped much through their involvement in many charities : They have financially helped the victims of hurricane Katrina by recording a charity single written by Mickael Stipe. They have also supported organizations like Amnesty International and Cancer Active by giving them 10% of their profits. Moreover, they have also asked that any gift intented for them should be donated a charities.

Hope it helps

je suis plus que ok avec le texte mais pourquoi tout mettre au passé??? C'est tjs actuel. Coldplay is one....Since then they ;help; they have financially helped; they have supported;; moreovaer they also ask that.....(ils le font toujours)....
mon commentaire n'est pas bon....Since 1996, Coldplay is one of the most famous British rock band . They are quite involved in charities. For example, they financially helped Katrina hurricane's victims (by) recording a charity single written by Michael Stipe (who is the singer and composer of the R.E. M band). They support Amnesty International and are Cancer Active : they always give them 10% of their profits. Moreover, they ask that any gift intended for them has to be donated to charities.
je sais pas si c'est mieux ou pas que Babybloom, à toi de faire un mix entre les 2!!!!!