Bonjours, j'ai un oral d'anglais à la rentrée, et 'ai besoin d'une petite correction de texte. Ce n'est que des bout de phrase de mon texte. Merci

Today I am going talk about a chapter in class during the year

The main points I will be talking about are :

Firstly, I will talk about the life of Thomas Edison

Secondly, I will talk about his inventions that have revolutionized the world

Finaly, I will present a contest in search of a good invention.

Unfortunetly, this inventor is not with us because he died at the age of 84.

Let me turn now to the contest. America's Young Inventors is a contest in which a prize is given to the best inventor.

Even today, several people are looking for new useful creation for the world

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ne met secondly dis THEN
pardon c'est UNFORTUNATELY j'ai dis le contraire
Ne met pas EVEN today juste TODAY

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2014-04-17T12:51:54+02:00
C'est correct mais il y a quelques petites choses à changer:
I will talk about his inventions which have... et pas that
FORTUNATELY et pas unfortunetly

bon courage
Merci ! Y'a que ça comme faute ? Y'a rien sur cet phrase ? : Today I am going talk about a chapter in class during the year.
i am going TO talk
j'espere t'avoir aider
Je rajoute que "finaly" prends deux "l" et pas un seul. :)
exacte