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It the night of Halloween, the horror night.

The scene takes place in the haunted castle, outside the full moon shine in the cold sky of autumn. A group of students composed of two girls: Camille and Marine and two boys: Maxime and Léo. They visit the castle of Ravenswood to have the fear of her lives Students don’t know that the castle is haunted by a ghost, his name Sir Oxcley.

When he was alive this ghost killed many students. He kept her corpses in the cellar of this castle. Sir Oxcley was an assassin, he executes her victims with cold blood and they hung in her crypt. When he was killed, his ex-wife was in the castle in this scary night of storm. Scotland Yard conclude at an accident, can’t proved a homicide.

The group comes in the castle, an icy wind petrified students and close the door behind them, leaving them in the dark. Forced to advance they explore the castle. Suddenly the ghost appears he is awesome old man with a regard of killer, her shirt is covered of blood and a spooky voice rises: “GET OUT TO MY CASTLE! OTHERWISE MY REVENGE WILL TERRIBLE” The sound resounds in the entire castle. Camille, Léo, Maxime and Marine can’t moves because they are paralyzed. A time after, all is strangely calm. Visitors decide to continue to visit him, they roam corridors with a candle. At the end of the corridor there is a wood big door. They approach to the door and his open in a scary grinding. They discover with horror a lot of corpses hung by a rope, the blood dripping on the floor suddenly the door closes with a slam ! And a spooky cry rises: “I YOU SAID “ We never saw the four students…

Merci ! :)

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2012-05-02T20:08:45+02:00

alors c'est say pas said ,I YOU SAY , ET YA PLU AUCUNE FAUTE TA MIS DU PRETERIT C'EST PARFAIS

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2012-05-02T20:12:32+02:00

Of their lives *

his victims *

he is an andsome *

his shirt *

will be terrible *

couldn't move *

We haven't see the four students again *