Bonjour,

dans quelques jours je passe à l'oral en anglais, mais euh je n'ai pas eu beaucoup d'idée pour cette notion

Pouvez me dire si il y a quelques fautes et des manques de parties ?

Merci

To illustrate the notion of «Spaces and Exchanges» it definies This notion deals with the geographical and symbolic areas that all societies occupy and the interactions between men and different societies. Our world is built on the exploration and conquest of new spaces. The different cultural, economic, sociological and language interactions have shaped and characterised our modern-day world. I'm going to present the progress of multiculturalism in Great Britain

First of all we will define what it is the multiculturalism : it's the preservation of different cultures or cultural identities within a unified society as a state or notion.

The multiculturalism in Britain is essential it is composed of Scotland,England &Wales.It concerns several cultures who live together, this is thanks to immigration. This are different "races" who are cohabiting together coming from other countries and speaking the same language. In GB, the multiculturalism is something well seen that the people respected and tolerated. This mixture of religions, race and immigrants is a advance and an example for the other countries.

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2014-04-13T15:34:30+02:00
Bonjour, j'ai lu ton texte et globalement c'est assez bien. Tu as des fautes de "grammaire" par très importantes, elles sont soulignées.

To illustrate the notion of «Spaces and Exchanges» it defines. This notion deals with the geographical and symbolic areas that all societies occupy and the interactions between men and different societies. Our world is built on the exploration and conquest of new spaces. The different cultural, economic, sociological and language interactions have shaped and characterized our modern-day world. I'm going to present the progress of multiculturalism in Great Britain. 
First of all, we are going to define what is the multiculturalism : it's the preservation of different cultures or cultural identities within a unified society as a state or notion.The multiculturalism in Britain is essential. It is composed of Scotland,England &Wales.It concerns several cultures who live together, this is thanks to immigration. These are different "races" which are cohabiting together and which are coming from other countries and speaking the same language. In GB, the multiculturalism is something well seen, that the people respects and tolerates. This mixture of religions, races and immigrants is an advance and an example for the other countries. 

Si tu as des questions, n'hésite pas:-).