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"Tom, this afternoon, I have a phone call from Juno. She break up news to me. And you'll never, ever guess what is it."
"She is going to be on a desert island for 5 years ? "
"You're silly or what ? She is going to be on television !"
"Really ? ... That's not true. I don't believe it."
"She apply for Secret Story. Have you seen it ? And she was selected among 100000 candidat !"
"This is when about twenty people locked in a house all summer with a secret ?And Then the viewers vote for the best candida every week ? "
"Yes and this is obligatory of discover the secret of each and at the end of programme, the winner wins a money. "
"This is not my cup of tea because I go mad in this house. "
"This exactly what I told him. "
"I didn't know that TV reality shows the interested."
"Since childhood, she be in the spotlight."
"She'll have of choose a programme more adapted for his age. "
"She have it one's own way."
"Yes, we will vote for it anyway. It is after all our friend "
"All for Juno !!!!!"

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2014-04-12T21:48:52+02:00
Bonjour je suis anglais nee en angleterre je vias tout te corriger!
"Tom, this afternoon, I had a phone call from Juno. She broke up news to me. And you'll never guess what it is."
"She is going to be on a desert island for 5 years ? "
"Are you silly or what ? She is going to be on television !"
"Really ? ... That's not true. I don't believe it."
"She applied for Secret Story. Haven't you seen it ? And she was selected among 100000 candidats !"
"This is when about twenty people are locked in a house all summer with a secret ?And  Then the viewers vote for the best candidat at the end of each week ? "
"Yes and this is obligatory of discover the secret of each and at the end of programme, the winner wins a sum of money. "
"This is not my cup of tea because I'd go mad in this house. "
"This exactly what I told him. "
"I didn't know that TV reality shows interested him."
"Since childhood, she was in the spotlight."
"She'll have to choose a programme more adapted for his age. "
"She will have it her way."
"Yes, we will vote for it anyway. It is our friend after all. "
"All for Juno !!!!!"
derien anglais pas mal mais quelque fautes de grammaire et de verbe irregulier

Mille merci. D'accord. Pourriez vous également corriger mon introduction svp ? " In London, Back at home, Ally tells her husband Tom, that this afternoon she have a phone call from his friend Juno "