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2014-04-09T05:25:14+02:00
Dear Gran, ma;

I am writting to you but I must hide because my master Mr Smith do not want his slaves to be educated. He doen't want me to learn how to read and how to write.
Every morning I get up at 4 , to go and fetch le wood for Mr Smith 's bedroom.I must lit the fire to warm his bedroom and also to warm the water for his bath. I do not want to wash him but he tells me to stay to rub his back.I'm too young for that, dont you think so grand ma. I wish I were with you but my mistress wanted me to work in the house and not indoors.In a way I'm lucky because it is less tiring to work indoors, isn't it grand ma?

bUT i MISS YOU SO MUCH  i MISS THE STORIES YOU USED TO TELL ME AT NIGHTS WHEN i WAS A LITTLE GIRL;i ALSO MISS OUR EVENINGS SINGING WHEN IT WAS HOT AND WE USED TO STAY OUSIDE 

My mistress asked me to help in the kitchen too and I try to do my best because I want to learn cooking. Sometimes durind the day when the chores are finished, I go and play with my young mistress.She has beautiful long hair and I wish I were like her.She smells nice and she has beautiful dresses. She allowed me to ply with her beautiful doll.,But I can't play too long with her because her wather says he doen't want her to ply with negroes.Yes, yes, he sais negroes although he knows quite well
I am a bit white, I'm not a negro. You know it don't you gran ma? You know what happened to mum, you know it don't you? I miss her quite a lot but I know she's protecting me from whrer she is.You told me so.

GRAND MA . i MUST LEAVE YOU NOW BECAUSE IT IS TIME TO PREPARE BREAKFAST ; I MUST HURRY; gOD BLESS YOU gRAN MA; 

Your gran daughter Clarisse

à la 7ème ligne , le mot n'est pas indoors mais outdoors
ligne 15 ce n'est pas her wather mais her father
j'ai essayé!!!
alors pour le format, je ne sais pas ce que c'est donc à toi de voir comment vous avez fait en classe. Moi je t'ai mis uniquement le contenu.Il s'agit d'une adolescente esclave qui n'a pas une vie aussi dure que les autres mais qui est l'enfant d'une esclave qui s'est suicidée après avoir eu son bébé , concu du viol de son maitre comme cela se faisait à l'époque de l'esclavage!.Elle écrit à sa grand mère qui n'est pas avec elle parce que cette dernière travaille aux champs.
okk merciiii beaucoup