Bonjour, j'aimerait avoir des avis et/ou des critique utile sur mon devoirs d'anglais.

Voici l'énoncé:
Préparer un exposé a l'oral sur une photo/image/illustration de votre choix représentant la notion de progrès. Dans un premier temps, expliquez pour quoi vous avez choisi cette photo, après en quoi représente t elle le progrès et enfin vous procéderez a sa description. Utiliser le bon vocabulaire étudiez en cours.

Voici mon devoirs rédiger et la photo que j'ai choisis:

I chose this illustration because it represents the progress in the telephony.


This illustration represents the progress because have can see the evolution of telephones during a last one there years. Indeed the very first telephone it is Motorola, it was creates in 1973 by Martin Cooper. This historic event in beneficial summer for the market of the telephone which is a lot to develop. Consequently we saw being again born mobile phone which are more and more innovative.


We can see on this illustration 8 phone all very different. First of all has left one sees the very first mobile phone and then one telephone can see the others which have followed until today. According to this illustration we notice that the size of the antenna shrank in the fur with measure of the evolution not until exist any more. Then during the evolution we see that the size of touches too shrunk until disappear for the new versions of mobile phone. Besides the microphone narrowed too in the fur with measure of the years but does not have disappeared. Of more a screen is appeared during the evolution, it became bigger and bigger, in colors and even tactile.



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2014-03-30T14:05:41+02:00
Bon texte!!!!!!!!!!!!!!