par exemple:i love hanball and football,i can play football verry well
i hate swims(je deteste nager)
i practises tennis and football...

my name is...I am...old I'm shy(timide) I was born in ...my favourite singers are ... I have been to.... last summer I went to..... I have....brothers. ...sisters my mom is..... my dad is..... during my free times I like going for shopping with my friends but I dont like reading (my hobbies are swimming , dancing )
utilise des mots de liaisons comme but first moreover finaly et i think, as far as i'm concerned... ça rapporte des points !!
moreover= de plus as far as i'm concerned= en ce qui me concerne
oki merci