Bonsoir c'est pour un exposé sur Las Vegas j'ai fait le texte mais je ne sais pas si j'ai des fautes. Si oui pourriez vous me les corriger svp ?Merci d'avance.
1) Its origin.
Las Vegas is the name given by the Spanish and means "the meadows".The place was known especially for its ambulance of water in basement.

2) What can you do in Las Vegas ?
Sin City is the world capital of gambling,attracting large numbers of people through its casinos.City subject to filming in the world of cinema. You could enjoy this city by visiting the Red Rock Canyon, the sign "Welcome To Fabulous Las Vegas".Spend one night in the most well known hotels such as Luxor, , New York New York, Paris or Bellagio. You can do horseback riding in Red Rock Canyon, making chases in the desert buggy, why not be tempted by a quad tower of fire in the valley, get to the top of the red mountain, down the Valley of fire. Why not water rafting, doing kayak and water sports on the Lake Mead and the Colorado river, the opportunities to wet yourself do not miss around Las Vegas.
Il faut insister sur les suggestions mais je n'y arrive pas beaucoup j'ai fait ce que j'ai pu.

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c'est super bien, mais its originS peut-être
Merci

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2014-03-09T19:23:18+01:00
1) Its origin.
Las Vegas is the name given by the Spanish and means "the meadows".The place was known especially for its ambulance of water in basement.

2) What can you do in Las Vegas ?

Sin City is the world capital of gambling,attracting large number of people through its casinos.City subject to filming in the world of cinema. You could enjoy this city by visiting the Red Rock Canyon, the sign "Welcome To Fabulous Las Vegas".Spend one night in the most well known hotels such as Luxor,  New York New York, Paris or Bellagio. You can do horseback riding in Red Rock Canyon, go chases in the desert buggy, why not be tempted by a quad tower of fire in the valley, get to the top of the red mountain, down the Valley of fire, why not water rafting, do kayak and water sports on  Lake Mead and the Colorado river, the opportunities to wet yourself do not miss around Las Vegas. 
Tu as recopié ce que j'ai écrit.
What you have written is excellent ,,, I've just made the necessary corrections .
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2014-03-09T19:40:22+01:00
Sin City is the world capital of gambling, attracting a large number of people through its casinos.The city is subject of filming in the world of cinema. You can enjoy this city by visiting the Red Rock Canyon, the sign "Welcome To Fabulous Las Vegas". You can spend one night in the most well-known hotels such as Luxor,  New York New York, Paris or Bellagio. You can do horseback riding in Red Rock Canyon, go on chase in the desert buggy, and why not being tempted by a quad tower of fire in the valley, getting on top of the red mountain, down the Valley of fire, and maybe water rafting, doing kayak and other water sports on  Lake Mead and the Colorado river, you can't miss the opportunities to get wet while you're in Vegas.
J'espère que c'est tout, bonne chance!