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I'm going tell about my hobbies. Is Rollerblading.
My mother buys me my first rollers at the age of 10. Until my 12 years old i have do just for pleasure then one time I went to Trocadero, when i discovery a Rollerblading club specialized on height jumps doing a demonstration.
They jumped very height jumps, amazing tricks and back flips. I had wanted to continue and progress since this day.
I quick have a lot of friendship with the members of the club to integrate the group. I meet the manager to inscribe me in the group.
When i integrate the club i start learning the bases, doing games like "sparrow hawk", that consist going one way to the other trying to not be touched. This game learn me to better handle my rollers and the speed. Then I learn the "Tac-tac" that consists to descend stairs in back or front with speed. With time i started to get myself better. Then my friends made me know a skatepark beside my home. He was pretty big and he contains two bowls one bigger than the other, there was a lot of skaters.
The 1st day i fall a lot of times trying to get in and out of the bowl. Sometimes I stayed blocked on the middle of the bowl with no way to getting out.
1 Month after i was getting better on the skate park.
On the path to the trocadero to the skate park they learn me to catch cars with rollers. I started catching a bus, it’s the more easy and then a started with cars, they’re faster luckily I never fall. It's preatty fun but dangerous.

More i getting better more i start loving this sport, i couldn’t do without, it becomes a passion, I was capable to stay with my rollers all day without getting they off. After learning a lot of things I felt ready to jump, like the other members of the club, They jumped with the help of a launching pad and they should cross over a height bar minimum 2 meters and the most higher jump I saw was 3 meters 40. Sometimes they take off the height bar to so back flips.
So I start jumping without the height bar because I couldn’t jump over 2 meters, but step by step i could jump the 2meters, fall a several times but I was happy.
What i hated the most was the winter, for the could and the rain, in brief it was impossible to ride, but it wasn’t the winter that stopped me to learn more.
On 2009 my rollers club was closed ther was only one person to manage the club but he has retired, so the club was finish, no more launching pad it was preatty disappointing.
During 1 year I don't have saw my friends doing roller, but sometimes i saw they on the skatepark.
One day we have the idea to create a launching pad, It was a piec of wood over a bench.
Thanks to that idea we have be abble to continue jumping over the intire summer.

One day people have bring mattress to the skate park to practiced some new tricks, that day I trained myself to do the back flip, I was very happy to have that opportunity to learn what I have always dream to do, and that's how I learn the back flip.
Now that I know a lot of tricks I continue to practice this sport, I do some demonstration with my friends at Trocadèro and sometimes on the bridge of Notre Dame, I like when people come to see me mostly the tourists to take some photo with them, I also had several to be sponsor to brands of rollers and clothing, but to do that I should stop the school, however I think that is important to learn how to do rollers because it's a practice to move to the school or your work.
That's all I have to say I hop you enjoy it.

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2012-04-30T21:38:59+02:00

Couc !

Pas de souics, sous réserve de mes propres fautes :).

 

I'm going to talk about my hobbies. It is Rollerblading.
My mother bought my first rollers when I was 10. Until my 12 years old i practised just for pleasure. then, one time I went to Trocadero,  i discovered a Rollerblading club specialized in height jumps. People taked demonstrations. 
They jumped very height, amazing tricks and back flips. I wanted to continue and to progress since this day.
quickly I discovered a lot of friends in the members of the club and I integrated the group. I met the manager to inscribe me in the group.
When i integrated the club i started learning bases, doing games like "sparrow hawk", that consisted in going one way to the other trying to not be touched. This game learned me at better handle my rollers and the speed. Then I learned the "Tac-tac" wich consisted in taking down stairs in back or front with speed. This time i started to get myself better. Then my friends learnt me a skatepark beside my home. He was pretty big and they contained two bowls bigger than the other, there were a lot of skaters. 
The 1st day i fell a lot of times trying to get in and out of the bowl.