Bonjour Je dois faire un devoir en anglais sur mes vacances d’été j'aimerais être corriger si possible merci d'avance. HELP ME

C'est sur mes vaccances en ardéche, le beau temps, ce que j'ai fais et en particulier sur l'evenement principale qui est le canoe

During my summer holidays I am went two week in Ardèche with my family and from friends. I had of very good weather everything in the daytime of the sun during my holidays I am was going to visit certain cities and go shopping. I have took advantage of the good weather and the sun for tanned, on Tuesdays of the second week I my family and my friends we let us have make of the canoe, the front of went on canoes we had a life jacket and information concerning the route(course) who was 24 measured in kilometres, the canoes which we had taken was by two, I am went with my mother, I not never had it make previously and I have found his(her,its) very hard and tiring(getting tired), it is a very difficult sport and I had enough evil in arrived up to the end, I had pain everywhere when we left

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2012-11-05T13:44:28+01:00

During my summer holidays. I went two week in Ardèche with my family and some friends. We had a very good weather, everything in the daytime of the sun during my holidays. I went visiting certain cities and l'v been shopping. I have taken advantage of the good weather and the sun for tanned, on the Tuesday of the second week, myself my family and my friends we let us have make of the canoe, the front of went on canoes we had life's jacket and information concerning the road who was 24 kilometres, the canoes which we had taken was by two, I went with my mother, I had never make it previously and I have found it very hard and tiring(getting tired), it is a very difficult sport and I had enough evil in arrived up to the end, I had pain everywhere when we left  


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