CORRECTION D'UN TEXTE
Bonjours, j'ai rédiger un texte en anglais qui compte pour le bac, c'est donc très important et j'ai besoin de vous pour corriger mon texte et rendre un travail parfait sans faute de formulation.

Voici le texte qui a besoin d'être corrigé :
The motorized camera mount for " time lapse " and " HDR " is primarily used for shooting movies or for a special event.
You should know that is a time-lapse video made by a series of photographs taken at different times to present in a short time evolution of the photographed object over a long period .My role in this project is to contribute in some ways to the design of the carriage on SolidWorks as well as the realization of translational guide camera on a support rail 1.8 m. To do this, I searched and found 3 solutions that correspond to this problem and each has advantages and disadvantages.In the first solution I've shown through this sketch , we can see skates attached to end of the bars that allow translation of the carriage to the chassis.
The benefits in this solution is that in all the support is adapted to carry out the project under the conditions and time given . And implementation and design can be accomplished with a fairly reasonable budget because there is little room to buy or design . Such that the rails is from 150 to 200E and the carriage may be designed in SolidWorks .

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ATTENTION § C'est une correction que j'ai besoin et pas d'une traduction. DSL !

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2014-02-26T14:35:58+01:00
The motorized camera mount for " time lapse " and " HDR " are primarily used for shooting movies or for a special event.You should know that is a time-lapse video made by a series of photographs taken at different times to present in a short time evolution of the photographed object over a long period .My role in this project is to contribute in some ways to the design of the carriage on SolidWorks as well as the realization of translational guide camera on a support rail 1.8 m. To do this, I searched and found 3 solutions that correspond to this problem and each has advantages and disadvantages. the first solution I've shown through this sketch , we can see the skates attached to end of the bars that allow translation of the carriage to the chassis.The benefits in this solution is that in all the support is adapted to carry out the project under the conditions and time given . And implementation and design can be accomplished with a fairly reasonable budget because there is little room to buy or design . Such that the rails from 150 to 200E and the carriage may be designed in SolidWorks .

Voilà j'ai transformer un peu et voilà
Merci beaucoup ! J'ai encore un autre bout de texte, tu pourrais me le traduire stp ?
2014-02-26T15:47:31+01:00
The motorized camera mount for " time lapse " and " HDR " is primarily used for shooting movies or for a special event.
You should know that IT IS A time-lapse video made by a series of photographs taken at different times to present in a short time evolution of the photographed object over a long period .My role in this project is to contribute in some ways to the design of the carriage on SolidWorks as well as the realization of THE translational guide camera on a support rail 1.8 m. To do this, I searched and found 3 solutions that correspond to this problem and each has advantages and disadvantages.In the first solution I've shown through this sketch , we can see skates attached to end of the bars that allow translation of the carriage to the chassis.
The benefits in this solution is that in all the support is adapted to carry out the project under the conditions and time given . And implementation and design can be accomplished with a fairly reasonable budget because there is little room to buy or design . Such that the rails is from 150 to 200E and the carriage may be designed in SolidWorks .