Je dois écrire une nouvelle qui fait peur pour un devoir d'anglais que je dois rendre aujourd'hui par mail voici un petit résumé en français :

Un couple se rend dans un hôtel et rencontre des personnes plutôt sympa.
Durant la nuit la femme entend un cris qui la réveille , elle ouvre la porte de sa chambre est aperçois un corps par terre , paniqué elle réveille son mari , ensuite ils s'en vont alerter les autres occupant de l'hotel.
Donc du coup ils vont devoir "enquêter" pour savoir qui est le meurtrier et d'autres meurtres vont se faire.
A la fin il pense avoir découvert qui est le meurtrier sauf que c'était pas lui mais en réalité le mari du jeune couple.

Et voici ce que j'ai écris pour l'instant , là je bloque :

Maxime and Julia are an young couple. They are going in a hotel for spend the night.Maxime is strong and big , he is 25 years old. Julia is a young women, she's blond and she's 23 years old. They met some people in the hotel. Sam, Michelle , Charlotte, Pierrot, and Jennifer. Sam and Michelle are an old couple, Sam was an engineer and Michelle was an nurse. Charlotte is small and have red hairs, she's 30 years old. Pierrot is jennifer's best friends, he is a vet and he's 28 years old and Charlotte has been out of work , he's 28 years old like Pierrot.
During the night, Julia woken up beacause she heards a scream, she opened the door's bedroom and she seens Jennifer's body in the floor. Julian alert Max for told that there is jennifer's corpse. There is a murder in the hotel...
julian and Maxime gone to warn the death of Jennifer. They gone to try to find the murderer.

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  • Utilisateur Brainly
2014-02-19T16:22:45+01:00
Correction des fautes:
 Maxime and Julia are a young couple. They are going in a hotel to spend the night.Maxime is strong and big , he is 25 years old. Julia is a young woman, she is blond and she is 23. They met some people in the hotel. Sam, Michelle , Charlotte, Pierrot, and Jennifer. Sam and Michelle are an old couple, Sam works as an engineer and Michelle as a nurse. Charlotte is small and she is red-haired, she is 30 years old. Pierrot is Jennifer's best friend, he is a vet, and Charlotte has been out of work for ? years ou is out of work since 2010 (par exemple), both of them are 28 years old
During the night, Julia woken up because she heard a scream, she opened the door of the bedroom and she saw Jennifer's body on the floor. Julian alerted Max and told him that there was Jennifer's corpse. Someone was murdered in the hotel... 
Julian and Maxime went to tell  Jennifer's death. They tried to find the murderer.