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Without Jean Rhys’s text, Rochester in Jane Eyre seems agressiv because he speaks with exclamation like this « the woman to whom I was married lives !» .He is really angry because of the gossip about « the mysterious lunatic », which are fasle. He is annoying by what her wife is became with « his quivering limbs and white cheeks ». He appears as a rude men, he insults his wife (and her family). He said « she came of a mad family ». Rochester use an ironic image. He is seems agressiv because he use long sentences and repetions of his mad wife’s family. He is so contemptuous …

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We know that Antoinette’s chilhood was so unhappy. She use very short sentences to exprim what she thinks . She is give a voice to her mother. In her speech the importance of nature is very leading. The tone of her voice is really sad, she speaks like a victim of her past. She evokes her past like if it was a nightmare, in fact it’s a really dreamy discour. At the end of this extract Antoinette seems to be a prisoner.

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2014-02-18T19:40:39+01:00
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Without Jean Rhys 's text , Rochester in Jane Eyre Seems agressiv Because He speaks with exclamation like this " To Whom the woman I was married lives! ." He is really angry Because of the gossip about " the mysterious lunatic " All which are Fasle . He is annoying her by what Became wife is with "his quivering limbs and white cheeks ." He Appears as a rude men , he insults His wife ( and her family) . He Said " she came of a mad family ." Rochester use an ironic picture. He is Seems agressiv Because He wears long sentences and repetitions of His mad wife's family . He is so contemptuous ...
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We Know That Antoinette 's chilhood was so unhappy . She wears very short sentences to expressed what she thinks . She is give a voice to her mother . In her speech the importance of nature is very leading . The tone of her voice is really sad , she speaks like a victim of her past . She Evokes her past like if It was a nightmare , in fact it's a really dreamy discour . At the end of this extract Antoinette Seems to be a prisoner .