Bonjour, pouvez vous me corriger merci d'avance de tout aide

votre réponse à la tâche suivante en la déclamant comme si vous déclamiez un discours devant un public.
c'est un devoir oral Le but est bien de déclamer un discours sur le sujet de la liberté.
Votre prestation devra durer 3 minutes.





Your situation



You are a candidate for
the JUNIOR SECTION of the SOCRATES DEBATING SOCIETY.






Freedom is the quality
individuals have to control their own actions. Different freedom
articulates the relationship of us individuals to society in
different ways. Some concepts relate to life under a social
community, and therefore define the active exercise of freedom and
rights essential to us in many corresponding ways. Understanding our
freedom involves how we imagine, and structure our
individual roles and
responsibilities in our society in terms of our free will and our
determination.
When we talk of our
freedom, we also talk about our civil rights, it provides us with
specific rights. Though the scope of the term differs
among various countries,
some examples of civil liberties include the freedom from slavery and
forced labor, freedom from torture and death, the right to liberty
and security, freedom of conscience, religion, expression, press,
assembly and association, speech, the freedom of privacy, the freedom
of equal treatment and the freedom of life. Other freedoms may
include the right to own property, the freedom to defend our
self.














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pour moi c est bon:)
tu pense pas que je devrai pas plus le détaillé
c'est un devoir oral de 40mn
Le but est bien de déclamer
un discours sur le sujet de la liberté.
Votre prestation devra durer 3 minutes.
je suis prof d an glais

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2014-02-19T14:00:57+01:00


Freedom is the quality of  individuals being able to control their own actions. Different liberties articulate the relationship between individuals and the society in
different ways. Some concepts relate to the life within a social  community, and therefore define the active exercice of freedom and rights that have become essential to us.

Understanding our  freedom involves how we imagine, and structure our  individual roles and  responsibilities in our society in terms of our free will and our determination.
When we talk about our  freedom, we also talk about our civil rights. Though the scope of the term differs  among various countries,  some examples of civil liberties include the freedom from slavery and  forced labor, freedom from torture and death, the right to liberty  and security, freedom of conscience, religion, expression, press,
assembly and association, speech, the freedom of privacy, the right to an equal treatment and the right to live free. Other freedoms may  include the right to own property, the right to defend ourselves.

J'ai fait du mieux que j'ai pu ; je ne suis pas anglophone. Mais j'ai remarqué que tu parlais des droits et des libertés, mais pas des obligations correspondantes. ..
merci