Bonjour ! J'ai une lettre d'amour "marrante" à faire en anglais. J'ai réussi à créer le support avec les rubans les fleurs et tout ce qu'il va avec et j'ai aussi fait mon texte. Mais le problème c'est que je ne suis pas très douée en Anglais et je n'ai pas trop confiance aux sites de correction donc je voulais savoir si vous pourriez lire ma lettre pour voir si vous voyez des fautes et me les signalez si possible... Merci d'avance!! :D

Dear Sarah,

I'm writing this letter in order to tell you that how important you are for me. We've been best friends since 5 years now and we have shared full of things that i'll never forget!

Quarrels often for ridiculous reasons as : "It's my turn to serve cards! " "The last Fajitas it's mine!!" Seriousely we are worse than children!
Though we have shared many of good moments like this study strip in Spain! And even if it trained a lot of the week or that we were soaked to the skin it was OUR FIRST JOURNEY TOGETHER.
I remember when you fell thanks to the train ! It was hilarous!
Or we were so always together that we was called "The inseparable"!

today whereas I'm not anymore in Les M******* our friendship is always so strong proof that even if we are separed we are well left to be best friends for severals years ! for the best (and also the worst :p )

To conclude I want to tell you one thing : Thank you for being always there for me and i Love you !
voila j'espère qu'il n'y a pas trop de fautes >_<

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  • Utilisateur Brainly
2014-02-17T16:23:52+01:00
    I'm writing this letter in order to tell you that how important you are for me. 
⇒ I'm writing this letter in order to tell to what point you are important for me.

    Quarrels often for ridiculous reasons as : "It's my turn to serve cards! " "The last                   Fajitas it's mine!!" Seriousely we are worse than children ! 
We are quarreling often for ridiculous reasons, for exemple : "It's my turn to serve               cards!" "The last Dajitas it's mine!!" Seriously we are worse than children ! 

    I remember when you fell thanks to the train ! It was hilarous
⇒ I remember when you fell because of the train ! It was hilarious !

    Or we were so always together that we was called "The inseparable"! 
⇒ Je ne pas compris le sens de la phrase.

    we are well left to be best friends for severals years
⇒ we are well left to be best friends for several years


Derien. Ah d'accord, dans ce cas la phrase je l'aurais plutôt formulé de cette manière là : I remember too, than other people we called "The inseprable" because we were always together.
effectivement ça rend mieux... Mercii beaucoup!! juste j'ai une question comment ça se fait que l'on puissions faire we called sans le are pour faire la voix passive :o
Alors là je ne sais absolument pas ...
Bon ce n'est pas grave merci beaucoup déjà pour l'aide ! :D
^^