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Je raconte la suite de cette histoire Voir en desous
1) Mon histoire doit etre cohérente
2) Je respecte la concordance des temps ( les deux prétérits)
3) Je suis compréhensible ( Choix pertinent du vocabulaire , syntaxe..)


The wind was blowing and the rain was falling. A dog was barking. Suddenly Amman entered a house when the door creaked .
Then the man was going up to the first floor while the bells were toring .He opened the door to the library and the found a safe .
When the man forced the safe he stole the money but a woman saw him she shouted but he ran away and escaped

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2014-02-16T17:48:20+01:00
Bonjour, 
The wind was blowing and the rain was falling. A dog was barking. Suddenly Amman entered a house when the door creaked .
Then the man was going up to the first floor while the bells were toring .He opened the door to the library and the found a safe .
When the man forced the safe he stole the money but a woman saw him she shouted but he ran away and escaped
The young woman had called up any jolt the gendarmerie. The dog had escaped to catch this mysterious unknown who stole the money. The gendarmerie managed shortly after on the scene then a few days after the money to be found thanks to the dog then the man made arrive in prison. Everybody was so proud of this animal as the dog worked officially for the gendarmerie.
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