Bonjour, j'aimerais savoir si mon texte est bon car je l'ai fais sur reverso et ce n'est pas toujours fiable,


" Hello, I have to tell you!

I am in California on the West the USA;
- I have already visited Hollywood Boulevard and Beverly Hill, I met a star.
- I am already go on Golden Gate Bridge to San Francisco, I took many photos.

I have not visited the prison of Alcatraz in San Francisco yet and I have not explored the district Chinatown Gateway yet.

I am going to go to go shopping to Rodeo Drive to Beverly Hill and I am going to go to walk on the stars of Hollywood Bouvelard

Goodbye "

Voilà,merci.

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2014-02-10T23:07:33+01:00
I am in California on the West of the USA     ---> C'est mieux je crois ;)
I haven't visited the.....    ---> A revérifié je suis pas sur... :x
Im going to do shopping       ---> Pas sur non plus mais c'est se que j'écrirais ;)

J'espère t'avoir aidé ♥
merci :)
De rien ;)♥
I am in California on the West coast of the USA;
- I have already visited Hollywood Boulevard and Beverly Hill, I met a star.
- I’ve already been to the Golden Gate Bridge at San Francisco and I took many photos.

I have not visited the prison of Alcatraz in San Francisco yet and I have not explored the district Chinatown Gateway yet.

I am going to go shopping for Rodeo Drive at Beverly Hill and I am going to have a walk on Hollywood Stars Bouvelard