Bonjour demain j'ai un DM en anglais il faut raconter une histoire qui fait peur pouvez-vous me corriger les fautes svp voici mon texte :When I was a child I went with my friend Emma in England. She is elegant, black-eyed, long-haired. I like her because she is very funny and polite. We were visited my grand-mother, she lives in a haunted castle. She is intelligent and generous. She has brown-eyed , long haired . My grand-mother was very happy to we see. My grand-father was went in the city.
My grand-mother having a shower and Emma and me we was in the kitchen. I opened window because it was very hot in the kitchen, when suddenly I saw someone walking along gravel path the garden around midnight. First I heard a door creaking. I heard someone coughing the corridor. We were terrified. I whispered:
"Oh my god, what are we going to do ? "
When the killer opening the door to kitchen Emma and me we had scream but it was that grand-father. We were relievied. What a relief !!!