Bonsoir j'ai un DM d'anglais pour lundi l'énoncé est :
Raconter une histoire de peur.
Est-ce-que vous pouvez me dire si le texte que j'ai fait est juste :
When I was a child I went with my friend Kim in england Kim she is elegant, black-eyed long-haired I like her because she is very funny and she is polite. We were visited my grand-mother she lives in a haunted castle. My grand-mother was having shower and me y Kim we were in kitchen because we were very hungry. When suddenly around midnight,I saw someone walking along gravel path.
I heard door creaking
We were terrified. I whispered:
Oh my god, what are we going to do?
When the killer opening the door to kitchen
Kim and me we screamed it was grand-father
We were relieved. What a relief !!!