Bonjour,

je dois écrire un texte en anglais sur mon héros ou mon héroïne, je dois utiliser le superlatif et le comparatif de supériorité.
Voilà ce que j'ai fait :

My hero is my dad.

My dad is the person that I most admire. It has always been for me.
Even if my dad is no longer in this world, it is always in my memory.
My dad was a chemist before.
For 10 years he had a disease, but during those 10 years he has always kept the smile.
He was the smartest and nicest men I know.
Together we went to the cinema or expositions.
We watched a lot of film even the movies that scared and we did a lot of activities and games for boys.
My dad was adorable and always made me laugh. He was the most humorous of the family. My dad was always happy and he was unique. My dad was as cool as my mom too.
My dad loved me and I loved him too.
My dad is my hero

Pourriez vous corriger mes erreurs et me donner votre avis s'il vous plaît? ?
Merci !

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he was the smartest and nicest man i knew
together we would go to the cinema or art fairs
Tu peux ecrire en une ligne stp, ca m'aiderait bcp :)
we watched a lot of movies even the scary ones and we also did a lot of activities as well as games for boys
he was the most funny of the family

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2014-01-08T20:34:33+01:00
We watched a lot of film even the movies that scared and we did a lot of activities and games for boys.
My dad was adorable and always made me laugh. He was the most humorous of the family. My dad has been always happy and he was unique. My dad was as cool as my mom too.
My dad loved me and I loved him too. 
My dad is my hero