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(je décris un géant je réponds à la question what does he look like ?
He is very tall, he has long straight hair and blond, he has a round face like the sun, he has small black eyes like a mole, he has a hooked nose like an eagle and he has hamster-sized ears. He is smiling and you can see his big teeth like dominoes. He has a piercing under her lips. He is as strong as an ox.
(ici je réponds à la question what is he like ?)
He is a kind and generous sort of person, he protects the animals of the forest, he gives them something to eat.He has softness of a lamb.