Bonjour,

Pourriez-vous corriger mon texte si vous trouvez des erreurs, j'aimerai éviter les répétitions mais j'ai du mal, merci à tous.

(je décris un géant je réponds à la question what does he look like ?

He is very tall, he has long straight hair and blond, he has a round face like the sun, he has small black eyes like a mole, he has a hooked nose like an eagle and he has hamster-sized ears. He is smiling and you can see his big teeth like dominoes. He has a piercing under her lips. He is as strong as an ox.

(ici je réponds à la question what is he like ?)

He is a kind and generous sort of person, he protects the animals of the forest, he gives them something to eat.He has softness of a lamb.

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2014-01-08T08:42:20+01:00
He is very tall and has long straight blond hair . He has round cheecks and looks like a mole with his small black eyes. He has a hooked nose like an eagle and he has hamster-sized ears. When he is smiling , one can see his big teeth like dominoes.
He has a piercing under his lips. He is  also as strong as an ox.

He is a kind and generous sort of person. He protects animals of the forest, gives them to eat. He has soft as a lamb. ( or : He has the softness of a lamb)
J'ai juste fait une ou deux modifications; dis-moi si ça te convient.
merci c'est parfait. Est-ce que tu peux me dire si ce qui suis est correct, il me semble que j'ai mal placé mes adjectifs, je ne suis pas certaine.
It's pitch dark, the geant as big as a cathedral and very generous and helpful, plodded slowly into the deep magical forest to meet with his friend the animal, the small squirrel. Je te remercie d'avance.